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- ☀️2026年8月20日 22:36✨ Writing snapshot
nonfiction
Leo · G4
Did you know that some people do not love Ice cream? It's true! I am one of them. You might like Ice cream, but I usually eat it because I am hot, or for some other reason like sometimes I might just want to eat sweets. Other people might eat Ice cream for other reasons but even if you do not eat it, all of us have tasted sweet things before. So, this means that no matter how much money you have, everyone has tasted a sweet thing, whether it was candy or something else, we are the same.
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fiction
Leo · G4
On a purple day, Bob was freaking out because the sky was purple. “Help!” Bob screamed “Aliens are invading Earth”. Bob ran around his house. Bob jumped up and down until he exited the video game, the sky wasn't purple at all, it was just in‑game
✓ 孩子已重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年8月15日 18:51✨ Writing snapshot
fiction
Leo · G4
On a purple day, Bob was freaking out because the sky was purple. “Help!” Bob screamed “Aliens are invading Earth”. Bob ran around his house. Bob jumped up and down until he exited the video game, the sky wasn't purple at all, it was just in‑game
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年8月15日 18:48✨ Writing snapshot
fiction
Leo · G5
On a cloudy day, Joe wanted to play video games instead of going outside. But his mom told him to go outside “I might get struck by lightning ” Joe said. But his mom didn't believe that and made him go outside. When Joe came back, he smelled like burnt wood “Eww,” his mom said, “what happened ”. “I was next to a tree that got struck by lightning,” Joe said.
✓ 孩子已重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年8月10日 18:36✨ Writing snapshot
realistic fiction
Leo · G4
On a seemingly normal day, Joe was playing a PvP game. Joe was top 1 on the leader board, so he thought he was umbeatable. It was just a normal day he was 1v1ing a level 5 who flew up in the and shot him. After that, Joe checked the level 5 and he had a 100% win rate.
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年8月9日 18:29✨ Writing snapshot
Write about a friend who is kind to you. What do they do that makes them a good friend?
Leo · G4
On a beautiful day, a kid named Bob a sleepping. But then, he heared someone called out "the ships sinking!" Bob looked up See his brother, Joe next to the Miniature ship in the fish tank. Bob jumped up to grab the ship but it was at the bottom of fish tank "Thats the fith time this week" mom said as she was too Scoop up the ship.
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年8月7日 17:23✨ Writing snapshot
ficional
Leo · G5
On one beautiful day, Jay was playing video games. But then, Jay remembered a video he saw with a ad that claim to be able to scan all youtube videos for his avatar so he could see where he appeared. After Jay used it, he found out he appeared in several videos. So he made his own youtube channel
✓ 孩子已重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年8月3日 17:31✨ Writing snapshot
Write about a problem you solved recently. What was hard? What did you try? How did it work out?
Leo · G4
One day Bob was home alone reading a book when he heard something. It was has 50,000$ alarm that had builtin secret, a hole opened under him and lowed him down. He was face to face with the thief, “How!” the thief said. Bob said “(sponser name here) is the best”
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - 🌤️2026年7月21日 23:31✨ Writing snapshot
fictional
Leo · G4
Jo jerked at the sight of Bob;what? you're here too? they both said at the same time. "I'm leaving." said Jo. "no wait" said Bob, "I know you hate me after It ,but i been meaning to ask you, can i friend you in roblox?"."wait, you play it too?"asked Jo. "yes, absolutely!"said Bob. "You know,i don't really blame you for It,so.let's be friends again." "great idea."said Bob
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - 🌤️2026年7月21日 23:30✨ Writing snapshot
fictional
Leo · G4
Jo jerked at the sight of Bob;what? you're here too? they both said at the same time. "I'm leaving." said Jo. "no wait" said Bob, "I know you hate me after It ,but i been meaning to ask you, can i friend you in roblox?"."wait, you play it too?"asked Jo. "yes, absolutely!"said Bob. "You know,i don't really blame you for It,so.let's be friends again." "great idea."said Bob
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - 🌤️2026年7月21日 04:01✨ Writing snapshot
fictional
Leo · G4
Bob gasps ;"YOU" he says. Steven backs up says "no-no-no,we can talk about this." as Bob charges at him. Steven doges the first hit and Bob misses, he strikes again, hit a tree and geting his knife stuck. Using this as a opportunity, Steven runs into the darkess. Nooooooo, get back here Bob shouts ,but it is too late.
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fictional
Leo · G4
Bob gasps ;"YOU" he says. Steven backs up says "no-no-no,we can talk about this." as Bob charges at him. Steven doges the first hit and Bob misses, he strikes again, hit a tree and geting his knife stuck. Using this as a opportunity, Steven runs into the darkess. Nooooooo, get back here Bob shouts ,but it is too late.
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - 🌦️2026年7月20日 01:03✨ Writing snapshot
fictional
Leo · G4
Bob was suddenly teleported to an unknow place. He looked around in which sees nothing and leaves, little did he know that there was something in the shadows watching him. He looks around not seeing whats there; just kidding, he did see it (or them) he throws his throwing knifes at the stalker with perfection. The knifes perfectly surrounded the stalker and he was trapped, bob asks him:"WHO are you,where am i?". The man just smirks, saying :"Your wost" and disappears.
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年7月18日 21:52✨ Writing snapshot
fictional
Leo · G4
You have been out at an unknown island for ten days. You ate all the food that you had, so the only other survivors went out on a hunt for more food. Now you decided to look for them, but you find them injured and unconscious. You take one person's weapon and get into a fighting position, ready for whatever or whoever hurt your friends. You look around and clues tell you the enemy is gone. You were about to wake them up when you noticed that one person was missing. Your mind spins quickly, the person missing was the smartest, so there are two possibilitys. One, he found how to leave the island so he knocked everyone unconscious and left. Two, he got kidnapped by another person on this island who either doesn't want us to escape or they want to escape themselves.
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fictional
Leo · G4
You have been out at an unknown island for ten days. You ate all the food that you had, so the only other survivors went out on a hunt for more food. Now you decided to look for them, but you find them injured and unconscious. You take one person's weapon and get into a fighting position, ready for whatever or whoever hurt your friends. You look around and clues tell you the enemy is gone. You were about to wake them up when you noticed that one person was missing. Your mind spins quickly, the person missing was the smartest, so there are two possibilitys. One, he found how to leave the island so he knocked everyone unconscious and left. Two, he got kidnapped by another person on this island who either doesn't want us to escape or they want to escape themselves.
⏳ 等待孩子重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年7月18日 21:26✨ Writing snapshot
fantasy
Leo · G4
You been out at an unknown island for ten days, you ate all the food that you had, and the only other survivors are out on a hunt for more food. Now you decided to look for them, but you find them injured and unconscious. You take one person's weapon and get in fighting position. You look around, clues tell you the enemy is gone. You were about to wake them up when you noticed that one person was missing...
✓ 孩子已重写查看 AI 点评 → - ☁️2026年6月24日 01:49✨ Writing snapshot
Write about a place that is special to you (your room, a park, grandma's house). What does it look like? What do you do there?
Leo · G4
My room is not big enough to settle a desk. There is only a queen size bed inside. Only I can put in is a single table without drawers. I have a mac on it. Whatever the room is small or not, I love it.
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